5 Teeth Poem by D.A. Woods

5 Teeth

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Litle man, you give me so much joy,
watching you play and get upset with your toys.
When each tear subsides, you begin again. Intervener,
When you give me a smile that is as real as a hyenas.

Saturday, January 2, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: children
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 22 February 2010

A keen observation and an apt behavioral simile....alternately wailing and maniacal laughter calls. 'you give me a smile, as real as a hyena.' I loved it. CP

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M A 03 January 2010

'you give me a smile, as real as a hyena'? A sly smile or a devouring one? Or because of the 5 teeth? Cute.

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