((6) Hidden Wings Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

((6) Hidden Wings

Rating: 2.9


I´ve discovered angels
in her look.

Their moves reveal them too,
unmistakable steps
towards those who need them,
clean eyes,
untouched by fear,
without resentment.

Why are you close to me?
What´s your message?

We might have a message to deliver.

Perhaps I can´t feel my wings.
Perhaps I can´t get out
of these soulless places.

Words of hope,
a place for you,
where soft steps
make sense.

Wings to fly at ground level.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 August 2006

Very lovely imagery. This is a poem worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

Lovely love poem. Love it.

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Will Barber 18 April 2009

A very tender write, Luis. Wings enough for a song of wings. - Will

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 September 2007

Great write with beautiful imagery thanks for sharing forsharing.............

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Betty Louise Keck 06 April 2007

What an extradinary write, , , eloquent lyrics, , , should be put to music. Your poet friend, Betty

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Yufen Liou 12 March 2007

when you are aware you have hidden wings, then there is hope, thank God!

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