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6 P.M.

Rating: 4.8

How cautious is the wind
when it carries
outspoken sounds
across the vast plains
of my thought?

Your debris of the day
blasts me full on
with its rhetoric,
leaving me breathless.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Timothy Jarrett 06 January 2013

I have known that person

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Sally P. P. 23 September 2019

Thanks for your much appreciated comment. Sally.

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Heyyou Boy 18 November 2012

A deep felt emotion follows this work of art. Well done Sally

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Sally P. P. 10 October 2019

Thankyou for your much appreciated comment, regards Sally.

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Hazel Connelly 11 September 2012

Great short poem loved it.

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Sally P. P. 23 November 2019

Thankyou for your interest, Hazel.

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Rekha Mandagere 08 March 2011

Beautiful poem. Take us to the world of freedom which is free from restrictions and monotonous work. At that time mankind is free to do its heartfelt work! great sentiment.

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Sally P. P. 27 January 2020

Thankyou for your lovely comment. Regards Sally

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David Beckham 13 August 2010

Distractions, distractions...All over the place. Yet we have to remain focused at all times. Thanks for sharing

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Sally P. P. 22 May 2020

Thanks for your input, David, most welcome.

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Short, but has impact! Well done.

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Sally P. P. 22 May 2020

Thanks, Denise, for your encouraging thought.

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Paul Judges 08 June 2010

I enjoyed this short poem, Sally

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Sally P. P. 22 May 2020

Nice to hear from you, Paul. Thanks.

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Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2010

Some days just end like that - WOW

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Sally P. P. 22 May 2020

Thankyou, Joe, for your understanding.

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