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Rating: 4.4

from my bed
I watch
3 birds
on a telephone
wire.
one flies
off.
then
another.
one is left,

then
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Jane Campion 21 June 2019

What a laugh I gotout of this poem. His personality just shot through.

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Khue Khue 20 February 2010

This poem is weird. I like it.

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Kingsley Dorian 10 July 2007

Ha, you have to appreciate his blunt honesty, if nothing else. I like this one.

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Robert Rae 23 April 2006

it's so true it's physically painful.

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Marcy Jarvis 03 October 2005

Thanks for this one, Charles. Boy - I know how it feels.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2019

Amusing expression. Beautiful poem. Well deserved as modern poem of the POD.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 June 2019

An innovative value addition with the fantastic flight of imagery. Well deserved modern poem of the Day.

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Lweuj Wepti 21 June 2019

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2019

Watching the birds! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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