A Baby’s Apprehension Poem by V P Mahur

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India

A Baby’s Apprehension

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I see my parents and others
Walking, talking and doing
So many things and bothers
Why so helpless is my being

I entirely depend on them all
And feel so gloomy and sad
If I try it gives painful fall
How long I must lie on bed

But one thing it tells me sure
Matchless servers parents are
With a heart so true and pure
In all weathers sweet and sour

Can I be ever like them at time
They need my help and care
Can I remember their rhyme
Ever be like them faithful fair

Wednesday, February 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: parents,rhyme
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on Feb 13,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Piyush Dey 08 April 2014

dear, you captured the same image, lovely, i appreciate it. thanks for sharing and for your comment.

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Yash Shinde 21 March 2014

.....lovely innocent thought of a baby are well pictured through this poem, we actually love being helpless, and being served during our childhood, but serving once parents after growing is a matter of uncertainty. You greatly brought out the emotions even through this short piece.....

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Lovely Baby 13 March 2014

Oh! Sweet thoughts of sweet innocent baby. Lovely imagination. Thanks!

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Hemant Kumar sah 29 October 2020

Nice poem and happy family in this poem

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Hemant Kumar sah 29 October 2020

Nice poem and very happy happy family in this poem

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Bhagya subeendran 24 November 2020

Good poem I like this family

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Subhash 07 November 2020

Very very nice family

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Subhash 07 November 2020

Very good poem and very very good family in this poem

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Amandeep 01 November 2020

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V P Mahur

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