Fleeing darkness from enclosing
Fitted spool on spool threading
Rush to fix the net maddening
Not just my daily usual fling
My life feels a mad sling
A pendulum swinging
Through every bling
Hilarious hanging
From low ceiling
Narrow ledge
Teetering
Sliding
Slow
Tow
Troll
Terribly
Terrifying
Stultifying
Freezing cold
No ray of hope
Like a bat flying
On a broken wing
Going by the clicking
Of your voice, agonizing
Mind seek solace singed
Heat, cold, wet, alternating
Noting the crystals cropping
Reflecting on rewards, singing
Best days of life contemplating
In the distance lightning cracking
Thunder booming, juggernaut rolling
A beautifully crafted poem Doris. Image filled and wonderful rhyming of words.10
Thank you, Nudershada. Bats are wonderful and beautiful creatures, don't you think?
My reason for writing poems is that they have way of prolonging the ecstasy of a thought - by shortening the distance one has to traverse between thought and action. Does that make sense? Prose has a way of diluting ecstasy by too many layers of clothing concealing the purity and beauty of a thought.: -)
Juggernaut definition is — a massive inexorable force, campaign, movement, or object that crushes whatever is in its path. It represents for me all the maxed out fears that someone has to cope with - all the unknown factors preventing personal success. If you have this juggernaut and you have stopped short of your plans, remember this - all the good things are on the opposite side of fear, a failsafe way to develop fearlessness, and so, be sure to go past fear, in whatever form.
The worst blindness is not having any knowledge of self, denying one's existence is precious and one should be grateful for each day that comes. I have made this commitment that I won't let a day pass without a poem as long as I am granted vision. Sightedness is the condition of seeing beyond barriers and handicaps, and reaching out with delight in just being alive.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
For my friend Ravi who went away one summer day, trying to find his way through the maze. Best wishes with your poems.