A Better Tomorrow Poem by johnny clark

A Better Tomorrow

Rating: 5.0


iam prayen for a better tomorrow
a tomorrow with out sorrow
a day wth out pain
i would be willing to pay

but the price is life
knowing this makes me think twice

i pray for a day without sorrow
hopefully god will give it to me tomorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Libbie Jones 05 February 2009

I love it Johnny.. Nothing like hoping for a better tomorrow keep it up you have true talent =0)

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*Trusting You* 16 December 2008

i would be willing to pay but the price is life knowing this makes me think twice good passionate lines... many of us wish for a better tomorrow. this is written well. Becca

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**paris* forever forgotten** 18 December 2008

i was charged that same price, then forgot about it, it isn't worth it, so i'm stuck still waitin for a better tommorow also. :) nice write, keep it up. ~paris

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Amanda Seltrecht 20 January 2009

I really like this poem... Keep it up good job! Homeslice

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Amanda Benoit 03 February 2009

wow, tis really deep, i like it kind'a sad but hopeful in a way great job =D

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Kimberly Wares 05 March 2010

wow, very deep, & its totally true tht the price is life!

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John Perdue 20 February 2009

hey good job man, I like the sense of hope it's not all despair very very good

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.....and we're talking about my writing? 1. this is good. 2. almost like mine in a way, which i thought you dissed....? ? : ( 3. this is wayy good. there is nothing wrong with wanting something more. xx millie xx

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Ashley A.s 18 February 2009

i think this is great. i wish i had a better tomorrow to. Johnny...u have true talent..keep writing

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Patricia Gale 06 February 2009

A few words that holds much depth... well done

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