A Bigger Wall Poem by Dom Hunt

A Bigger Wall



It comes in waves
Sometimes big sometimes small
Endlessly  they pile up
Bang against me till I fall
I try to stand but fail
On hand and knees I crawl
Trying not to drown in it
Even my breathing starts to stall
My heart beats a weary way
I cry to god to hear my call
Thinking I can't go another day
Strength I need to stand tall
My faith will help me build
Against this grief a bigger wall
 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

A really lovely write. Bien!

1 0 Reply
Greg Davidson 09 December 2012

I love the image you create for me - wave after wave - very effective

1 0 Reply
Barb Mcavaney 06 August 2012

You hit the wall with a bang. You will stand up again. Written with feeling and deept meaning

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
1 / 58
Dom Hunt

Dom Hunt

geelong
Close
Error Success