Thursday, September 25, 2008

A Bird Is Hardly Heard Comments

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A bird is hardly heard

This December is cold, too
Like the last one that
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A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker
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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2008

impressive poetic thoughts on December...few imageries there...good...you can do well by splitting the poem into two...nice work. Jaipee 10

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Gargi Saha 27 September 2008

WONDERFUL WORD PAINTING! MARVELLOUS. U GET 10++ BEst wishes............. Keep writing.......... Thanks for your nice comments on my poem My Balloon.

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A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker

A. Jayaprakash Jayaprakash Panicker

Kovilloor, Trivandrum, Kerala
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