Maya Neelima


A Bottle Of Images - Poem by Maya Neelima

My foot on ocean sand
I was walking,
Thinking mad..
Feeling the breeze sweep my soul,
Eternal love as a whole..
My hands were wet,
I wiped your sweat..
I hugged your dreams,
Heard your beats,
Lips always spoke..
When the heart was silent..
Words fluttered like this ocean,
So violent.
Realized the worth,
When pain sewed its death.
I could never hate,
I could never rate,
Because,
I had no such trait.

I just felt,
The bottle with my feet,
Unscrewed,
And images scrawled..
Some cold,
Sour and degraded..
I was on sand then.
Thoughts dripped through my eyes,
And I had a dry thirst,
Handed a bottle of images,
But,
I was blind,
To drink your light.


Comments about A Bottle Of Images by Maya Neelima

  • Utsav Patel (2/20/2014 2:43:00 AM)


    Now this is call a good read.. :)
    I like the way you writes!
    In every next poem, somewhere I remind my poems..
    Read my will o' the wisp
    I am sure, you will go mad by its metamorphosis..: D
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  • Indranil Bhaduri (7/16/2013 4:31:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem..need more from you, (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/14/2013 4:12:00 AM)


    nice poem....
    good flow and articulate thought process put in a delectable poetic format
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  • Gajanan Mishra (6/12/2013 4:28:00 AM)


    I am blind to drink your light, good one, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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  • Vishal Sharma (6/12/2013 4:25:00 AM)


    wow
    my god what a great poem
    i love your sentiments and above all the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 12, 2013


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