A Bottle Of Images Poem by Maya Neelima

A Bottle Of Images

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My foot on ocean sand
I was walking,
Thinking mad..
Feeling the breeze sweep my soul,
Eternal love as a whole..
My hands were wet,
I wiped your sweat..
I hugged your dreams,
Heard your beats,
Lips always spoke..
When the heart was silent..
Words fluttered like this ocean,
So violent.
Realized the worth,
When pain sewed its death.
I could never hate,
I could never rate,
Because,
I had no such trait.

I just felt,
The bottle with my feet,
Unscrewed,
And images scrawled..
Some cold,
Sour and degraded..
I was on sand then.
Thoughts dripped through my eyes,
And I had a dry thirst,
Handed a bottle of images,
But,
I was blind,
To drink your light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Utsav Patel 20 February 2014

Now this is call a good read.. :) I like the way you writes! In every next poem, somewhere I remind my poems.. Read my will o' the wisp I am sure, you will go mad by its metamorphosis..: D

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Indranil Bhaduri 16 July 2013

Beautiful poem..need more from you,

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Saadat Tahir 14 June 2013

nice poem.... good flow and articulate thought process put in a delectable poetic format

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Gajanan Mishra 12 June 2013

I am blind to drink your light, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Vishal Sharma 12 June 2013

wow my god what a great poem i love your sentiments and above all the title of the poem.

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