A Boy's Love Poem by Robert Eclipse

A Boy's Love

Rating: 5.0


Why does she make me feel like this,
Is it how she flicks her hair,
Or how her eyes are oceans of bliss,
I can't help but feel its unfair,
As we've known each other such a long time,
And come so far down the line
I'm scared of these feelings
I've never had before
I dread it's...
It can't be...
But it is...
Love. I love her
But she doesn't love me
She loves someone else as i see.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is a flipside to A Girl's Love by Broken heart emo i saw the poem and just had to write this as the boys thoughts from her poem in which the girl is speaking about him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Wooten 25 June 2012

OMG I LOVE UR POEMS

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Broken Heart 02 July 2012

This is short but really sweet! [3

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Charlie Bones 11 September 2012

wow. this is brilliant. u have a natural talent robert. i really love this poem. its simple yet explains so much. u are really clever to be able to explain the other side of this poem that this other person wrote.10 from me.

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Robert Eclipse 07 September 2012

tamara this poem is not about me its merely a flipside poem to broken heart emo's poem it isnt from my veiw im just good at writing from other points of veiw and forcing emotions upon myself to understand how people have can or do feel. eclipse

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Tammie Aimson 05 September 2012

That's how it feels to be in love Robert. You have the feelings and emotions of true love and the first type of rejection it hurts. it hurts but you will get used to it untill you find that girl, just like im searching for the right boy. xx tamara

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Freddy Ibarra 04 July 2012

Contrast in a position that's not your own is difficult but you seem to have achieved it :)

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Kaila George 03 July 2012

Wow that was brillant...love the simplicity of it all and your bio, its intresting to see someone so young with an awesome talent like yours...and for once its good to see a such a nice view on how the other gender see's things from their perspective. Will read more of your poems. Oh and by the way 10 from me.

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