A Boy Story Poem by Gloria Rose

A Boy Story

Rating: 4.8


I’m just a boy
Who have the worst luck
In his life
I’m trying very hard to find someone
Someone who would be amazing
Amaze of what I can do to her
Love, and give her my heart
Listen girl
I’m the man who would love you
Until the end of this story
Sometimes I may make mistakes
But, I know you would help me
Learn from those mistakes
There are only two things that I would not do to you
Is cheating behind your back
And not caring for you as much I do for myself
There is one thing that I would say to you every day
Is I love you
I know for sure that
I wouldn't let you leave my space
Because I love you girl
My strength medicine would be you
When I would need it
Because you make me better
Every day and every night
When you are around me

Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: caring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niroda Abboud 20 November 2009

well written, flows nicely

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Edgar Arriaga 20 November 2009

wow! thatz true we need guys to be more intouch with there emotional side........very creative......

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Lynn Glover 04 February 2010

Gloria, I'm not much on non rhythmic poetry however, this poem says a lot about the story of wanting and needing love. Very strongly written for someone so young. Very nice Job. Keep up the good work. Your New Poem Pal Lynn

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Omar Ibrahim 10 December 2009

very good and full of thoughts....keep impressing thnx for sharing

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I like this. Cool perspective again. It kinda sounds like what you wish you could find in a guy. Sounds like that would be a pretty amazing person.

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Danny H 01 December 2009

This is very nice, but did you make it in perspective of a boy to show how men need to be more in touch and should think this way?

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 November 2009

I told her many times, but she never listened.. yet she's mine. That was good dear..carry on

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