I’m just a boy
Who have the worst luck
In his life
I’m trying very hard to find someone
Someone who would be amazing
Amaze of what I can do to her
Love, and give her my heart
Listen girl
I’m the man who would love you
Until the end of this story
Sometimes I may make mistakes
But, I know you would help me
Learn from those mistakes
There are only two things that I would not do to you
Is cheating behind your back
And not caring for you as much I do for myself
There is one thing that I would say to you every day
Is I love you
I know for sure that
I wouldn't let you leave my space
Because I love you girl
My strength medicine would be you
When I would need it
Because you make me better
Every day and every night
When you are around me
Gloria, I'm not much on non rhythmic poetry however, this poem says a lot about the story of wanting and needing love. Very strongly written for someone so young. Very nice Job. Keep up the good work. Your New Poem Pal Lynn
very good and full of thoughts....keep impressing thnx for sharing
I like this. Cool perspective again. It kinda sounds like what you wish you could find in a guy. Sounds like that would be a pretty amazing person.
This is very nice, but did you make it in perspective of a boy to show how men need to be more in touch and should think this way?
I told her many times, but she never listened.. yet she's mine. That was good dear..carry on
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow! thatz true we need guys to be more intouch with there emotional side........very creative......