Saturday, July 4, 2015

A Broken Promise Comments

Rating: 4.5

You told me you’d never leave me,
You told me you’d never go away.
But he stole your heart didn’t he,
When you met him again in May.
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Saatvik Chaudhari
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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly. It's whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned from the heart with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 04 July 2015

An experience many have had to endure. Thanks for sharing, Saatvik I wish you peace

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Hans Vr 04 July 2015

very we written love poem

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