A Candle In The Dark Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Hazel Night. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

She put her hand on my waist She pulled me close Wistfully Crying Sighing once@21 it happened with me but she was like my granny LOL Lovely candles flame me still

Very nicely written verse about lost love, I read it again and again, sad and nostalgic with a note of surrender and acceptance in the end.10+

I love this poem - the emotion is great.

Beautiful piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Hazel.

Fantastic poem with a lovely narrative. Thanks, Hazel.

I like this! A very good first poem posted on this site. Welcome to Poem Hunter!