A Cascade Of You Poem by Rachel The Hair Guru

A Cascade Of You



Thunder quakes outside my door
I open it, it starts to pour
.
Sheets of water cascading down
I feel your presence all around.

Night wind blows, a chill in the air
I take it in, I feel you there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catherine Rica Cosico 04 June 2008

Affection is in the air Sheets of water pouring in thy heart full of passion full of love entering the soul entwined

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Sheets of water cascading down I feel your presence all around. Rachel Ann Butler

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Cory Jensen 12 January 2009

I agree with Chris.....you are amazing at what you do! ! ! ♥ ♥ ♥

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Chris Harris 23 November 2008

Beautiful Rachel, made me shudder, you are the queen of short and sweet! x

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Al Ramos 03 August 2008

They say love is all around us and your poem shows it. Great job.

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Subbaraman N V 08 June 2008

Greatly emotional! A nice write. Thanks for sharing!

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