Monday, September 28, 2015

A City Lay In Ruins Comments

Rating: 5.0

The faceless-ageless friends didn't find her hiding.
Instead there was a special gift,
the ability to hide in creases of time.
It hung there motionless on the wall as it had minutes ago.
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Stevie Smith
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Chinedu Dike 26 November 2019

A poignant rendition written in heightened poetic diction with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Stone Fox.

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Adeline Foster 19 December 2015

How could anyone even think like that. Is there not a power in control who is wiser than even the poets? I sure hop so. Read mine - If There Be No God - Adeline

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Kelly Kurt 07 October 2015

A very well written piece, Stone. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2015

Very wonderful expression really. Wise sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2015

Yes....Time would never stop in this ruined world.....amazing sharing really....10

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