A Common Wish Poem by Barry Middleton

A Common Wish

Rating: 4.7


I do not need a grand reward
I only want a guide
I wish to join the winning team
if god is on their side

it's not a rare uncommon plea
to rise above the crowd
and when at last the day is done
to drift beyond a cloud

the world is a confusing place
we all desire the same
and most of us are satisfied
with very scant acclaim

and so I ask these questions still
when will we find release
since every soul is much the same
why can't we live in peace

A Common Wish
Tuesday, November 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 22 November 2016

A great poem with a great message. So beautifully conceived. Thought-provoking write. A sure 10.

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Barry Middleton 22 November 2016

Thanks. I think it may be hopeless however that we will ever have peace. War seems to be in our DNA.

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