A Confession Poem by Dustin Bennefield

A Confession

Rating: 4.8


A mother and child
So close together
Yet so far apart

A barrier between them
So creativly smart
Torn down by words

A talk
A confession
A simplicity of trial and error

Problems resolved
Questions burned down
A mind will soar

An hour or two
Words are complete
What is born will end

All in all
They are both saved
And end with an embrace
And I LoveYou

Copyright 2006 Dustin Bennefield

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 06 June 2006

dustin I am sorry I believe you told me but you have a mastery of words that do compare and surpass myself

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David Gerardino 05 June 2006

A simplicity of trial and error, tis a great line.................

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Flying Duck 05 June 2006

hey this is a great poem i really like it your a great writer! ! madeleine

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 05 June 2006

sweet and simple and to the point. i like it

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Anisha Notelling 01 June 2006

wow ur so good at writing! ! ! sweet....oh and in need of sum help, my profile says i'm 861! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 11 but i'm only 14 helP!

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