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A Mother Child

Rating: 5.0

A mother is a child
She is younger than her children
That is why she learns from them

She learns the value
Of overcoming sin
Temptation passes her by

Her Children are her mentors
She teaches them while

They teach her…… Perfect
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Tailor Bell 28 July 2006

Wonderfully flowing, familiar to everyone yet quite special in itself. Very nicely done. -T. Bell

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Daniel Tyler 19 July 2006

'A mother is a child She is younger than her children That is why she learns from them' Those lines rival anything I've seen these past few months for sheer poetic excellence- indeed the whole poem is mature, concise and insightful. Your poems are written fror a reason and I like that.

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Leigh A. Hill 16 June 2006

what a different poem. no one writes like this anymore. i love it. love always, starr

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Evan Moulson 09 June 2006

Wow, quite an amazing, touching poem....lots of imagry....excellent.

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Troy Younts 09 June 2006

'...A being not be seen...' A typo I think but otherwise a very touching poem, congrats!

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Geoff Warden 06 June 2006

You my young sir......are spectacular

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David Gerardino 05 June 2006

Of overcoming sin, you have some good lines

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Dustin Bennefield 25 May 2006

please comment thanks alot.......... Inkweaver

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