A Mother Child Poem by Dustin Bennefield

A Mother Child

Rating: 5.0


A mother is a child
She is younger than her children
That is why she learns from them

She learns the value
Of overcoming sin
Temptation passes her by

Her Children are her mentors
She teaches them while
They teach her…… Perfect

A Mother loves her child
With her life ……. Nothing more
She is burdened by love

She cares, She loves
She’s our mother
We love her

A team of the greatest
A mother and her child
One can’t live without the other

They run a race
A relay
Her love powers her

She can over come
All things
Just dig a little deeper

They are the strongest
A mother and her child
Nothing can separate their bond

Emotions pay a truce
A battle can be mended
Strongly from their hearts

She follows a God
A being not be seen
And so does her child

Her child follows her
They make her feel the love
What more could we want

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dustin Bennefield 25 May 2006

please comment thanks alot.......... Inkweaver

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David Gerardino 05 June 2006

Of overcoming sin, you have some good lines

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Geoff Warden 06 June 2006

You my young sir......are spectacular

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Tailor Bell 28 July 2006

Wonderfully flowing, familiar to everyone yet quite special in itself. Very nicely done. -T. Bell

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Daniel Tyler 19 July 2006

'A mother is a child She is younger than her children That is why she learns from them' Those lines rival anything I've seen these past few months for sheer poetic excellence- indeed the whole poem is mature, concise and insightful. Your poems are written fror a reason and I like that.

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Leigh A. Hill 16 June 2006

what a different poem. no one writes like this anymore. i love it. love always, starr

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Evan Moulson 09 June 2006

Wow, quite an amazing, touching poem....lots of imagry....excellent.

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Troy Younts 09 June 2006

'...A being not be seen...' A typo I think but otherwise a very touching poem, congrats!

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