A Cornish Path Poem by Egal Bohen

A Cornish Path



Today I walked upon soft turf
Within a summers day
Where blue sky met blue sea
Midst pink green thrift
And travelled long a Cornish path
That wandered further than I thought
Steep climbs
First down
Then up I onward fought
To where I sat and watched
Wild seabirds
Wheel and cry
Beneath precipitous cliffs
O’er seas that rolled and crashed
On rocks
Thrown out like jagged fingers
Far beneath
Which
Like gigs
Did battle then with waves
For sport
To send white spume
To billow up
As sails
Set on a spar
Reminding me of ships
That sailed
The oceans
Wild and bleak
The taste of salt
A smell of tar
Then
Walking on
Enraptured deep
In these events
Eventually
I stopped
To catch my breath
And pausing
Watched
The sun
Sink slowly
In the West

Within
My spirit knew
That moment
Then
That even
Should I see
No more
No planet
Was
More beautiful
Than this
On which
We walk
Nor Man
More fortunate
To orbit
Such a star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjana Aravind 16 August 2006

A very beautiful poem indeed. Anjana

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LOVEFOOL Aka 19 February 2009

I live in Cornwall and you capture the beauty of the landscape well 10+

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Tai Chi Italy 31 January 2009

I chanced upon this Cornish Path Egal, and so pleased I did, a wonderful tribute to being alive and appreciating the glory of nature. Like living in paradise! smiling at you, Tai

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I enjoyed this vivid depiction of a Cornish path. I have a better picture of the countryside having read your poem.

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Gillian.E. Shaw 05 December 2007

Superb imagery - as facinating, mysterious and magical as Cornwall is.

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G. Murdock 29 October 2006

Great wandering piece. Nature sketched like a Cornish painter. Inwardly drawn on the wall of some great limestone cave. thank you.

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