A Countryman Prayer Poem by Okim Otu

A Countryman Prayer

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Pool of tears
pregnant with pain
born out of hate
intended for the just
whose deeds speaks volumes
across all works of life,
to run our country aground
and raise the banner of evil
will turn cool
and comforting

Never again
will the eggs of good fortune
break on the alter of hate
never again
will gloomy cloud
shades our shinning stars.
may pool of unending tears
turn treasures of unending joy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The good works of our country's patriots will bring good success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 17 September 2022

Well crafted poem. The people who work for the welfare of their homeland rather than personal interests are the real heroes. A befitting tribute to often unsung heroes!

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Richard Wlodarski 16 September 2022

This is a very well written poem. Profound and inspirational. Top marks, Okim!

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