A Cup Of Hot Chocolate Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

A Cup Of Hot Chocolate

Rating: 4.7


We sit side by side
On a cool, gray afternoon
A December day
Sharing sweet moments over
A cup of hot chocolate

Sunday, December 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moments
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 October 2022

I'm glad I've revisited this one. NOW I want both ice cream AND cake! The only thing 'wrong' with this poem is: It's too short! 4 stars. bri ;)

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Nudershada Cabanes 01 November 2022

Thanks for the visit and comment Bri. Much appreciated.

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Bri Edwards 14 May 2019

! it's only been about four months since i left another comment, and i was going to start today's with the very same words: " sounds good to me" , after reading it twice today! ! ! it really does sound like a pleasant affair, but i MIGHT want my own cup, and....some ice cream as well. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Bri Edwards 21 January 2019

sounds good to me! got those tiny marshmellows? bri (:

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Hans Vr 29 December 2018

Wonderful moments captured in smooth verses

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 December 2018

A sweet tanka, dear Nuder...10++++

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Nudershada Cabanes 01 November 2022

Thank you kabayan. It's been a while.🙂

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