A Dam To Be Broken Poem by Daniel Fivelsdal Wetaas

A Dam To Be Broken

Rating: 5.0


Haunted by your presence
Staring at the sky
Knowing I would never
Dare to rise and fly

Smitten by the sight
Of the fairest girl, so cute
A trembling in my body
My mouth - I stand there mute

Overwhelmed by mountains
Majestic ones at that
Convinced that if I tried to climb
My body would lay flat

Looking back at choices
I know for sure one day
That I will overcome you
My fear that I obey

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 August 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Daniel. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Elite_PoemGuy 30 August 2018

i rate 10/10 veri nice my homie much respecc

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