A Dance Of Souls Poem by Kailee Williams

A Dance Of Souls

Rating: 3.5


I
Still see
Us dancing,
Your lips meeting
Mine.

I
Can still
Feel your hands
Holding me so
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Not
Wanting
To let go
But do I want
You?

Yes,
You are
Kind, and not
Unattractive.
Still…

You
Have not
Shown interest
In me until
Now.

Though
I may
Have come on
Too strongly for
You,

What
Will take
Place later?
Will we date or
Hate?

But…
When we
Were dancing,
I felt oddly
Warm.

Could
We have,
In that dance,
Linked our souls as
One?

It
Truly
Felt that way,
As if it was
Love

That
Joined us
Together
As one spirit
Then.

A
Dance of
The souls…is
It possible?
Yes.

But
Likely?
I doubt it.
Yet still, it felt
Real.

A
Dance of
Two souls in
The spinning lights,
Joined.

One
Essence,
One heart,
One entity…
One.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mizz.BabyGirl Brown 02 October 2009

that was beautiful i like how you broke it down

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Isaias Yemane 11 November 2006

Well I think you have captured the feeling - the emotions are there; the doubts; the yearnings; the use of 'simple words', in the sense that they are not too lofty, to express big...... requires talent and i think you have shown it here. please do write more and let us sip from the wells of your imagination. humbly

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Kailee Williams

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