A Deceptive Flower Poem by Luna Moon

A Deceptive Flower



She's truely blossomed,
Into a beautiful flower.
The fire in her eyes,
Is meant to devour.
Men from all across the sea,
That face would surely,
Torture thee.
Antagonistic she is,
So they'd better obey.
They dont know her beauty,
Has lead them astray.
On a winding road,
With full cherry trees.
Never to realize,
She isn't what he sees.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angel OfGod 06 December 2009

This sounds slightly similar to My Succubus maybe not as dark but certainly as most of the woman in my life. Nice write.

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Peri Morgan 10 July 2009

Love it. Reminds me of someone I know who does actually dazzle you with her beauty then rips out your heart. Well done.

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