A Deep Sea With Virgin Waters Poem by Poonam Gupta

A Deep Sea With Virgin Waters

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Your brisky breeze in was very faint,
blend of smile and flirt were on peak
I marginally erased a brick to taste the beam
The ambience was perfect so was you.
I adore the rain, it was a storm
and the wall shattered.
I feel it, admire it, unviel it..
and our positions swapped.
I took you everywhere, i was, i ever been,
but you weren't there.
I stick around solving the puzzle,
and you told me about you new way.
you were blessed, so was i
but something was crushed.
That dawn i dreamed of you, for the first time,
and felt the affection was so pure.
However the mystery is still there,
A deep sea with virgin waters.

September 2013

Wednesday, July 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,love,love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Poonam. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2015

To explore the waters of a new relationship. thanks for sharing, Poonam Peace

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Poonam Gupta 19 October 2015

Thanks :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2015

And the wall shattered! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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