A Deliberation In A Song. Poem by Meena Somasundaram

A Deliberation In A Song.

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A few days ago
not being long ago
a friend of mine called.

She had been away for long
did not hear from her for long
she being a close friend spoke.

We talked for hours together
nothing did bother
as we went on for a time.

It was a nice meeting of fun
discussed about terrorism and the gun
the hot topic of recent times.


Both of us were pained of the attacks
Paris in particular was ransacked
with hundred and twenty nine killed.

The cruelty seen in such moves
was beyond any prove
man killing man for no reason.

We sat silent for a moment in all
retrospecting the gunshots fall
a deadly silence followed.


What began as a warm up after long
got heated up almost in a way
this being a deliberation in a song.

Sunday, November 29, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2015

It was a nice meeting of fun discussed about terrorism and the gun the hot topic of recent times. you traveled a long way from fun to gun shots in your imagination... a great poem indeed.. with real thoughts in contemporary tone, ..thank you very much . tony

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Shakil Ahmed 29 November 2015

we are afraid of terror, that must be eradicated from the civilized world

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Meena Somasundaram 29 November 2015

Sure terrorism should be eradicated for the world to live in peace.

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B.m. Biswas 29 November 2015

thank u very much...i am too pleased getting you to be shocked with terrorism......i really feel sorry for these kind of inhuman deeds....you are requested to..go through my poem incompletely compleye and complete and modern era of free and extra....i hope you must be satisfied.........thank u for sharing...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2015

Talking for hours together with amazing hopes is definitely interesting. Wise sharing done really.10

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Meena Somasundaram 29 November 2015

Thanks for the appreciation.

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