Meena Somasundaram

A Deliberation In A Song. - Poem by Meena Somasundaram

A few days ago
not being long ago
a friend of mine called.

She had been away for long
did not hear from her for long
she being a close friend spoke.

We talked for hours together
nothing did bother
as we went on for a time.

It was a nice meeting of fun
discussed about terrorism and the gun
the hot topic of recent times.

Both of us were pained of the attacks
Paris in particular was ransacked
with hundred and twenty nine killed.

The cruelty seen in such moves
was beyond any prove
man killing man for no reason.

We sat silent for a moment in all
retrospecting the gunshots fall
a deadly silence followed.

What began as a warm up after long
got heated up almost in a way
this being a deliberation in a song.

Topic(s) of this poem: poems

Form: Occasional Poem

Comments about A Deliberation In A Song. by Meena Somasundaram

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/12/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    It was a nice meeting of fun
    discussed about terrorism and the gun
    the hot topic of recent times. you traveled a long way from fun to gun shots in your imagination... a great poem indeed.. with real thoughts in contemporary tone, ..thank you very much . tony
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/29/2015 5:45:00 AM)

    we are afraid of terror, that must be eradicated from the civilized world (Report) Reply

    (11/29/2015 5:50:00 AM)

    Sure terrorism should be eradicated for the world to live in peace.

  • B.m. Biswas (11/29/2015 3:41:00 AM)

    thank u very much...i am too pleased getting you to be shocked with terrorism......i really feel sorry for these kind of inhuman are requested to..go through my poem incompletely compleye and complete and modern era of free and extra....i hope you must be satisfied.........thank u for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/29/2015 3:04:00 AM)

    Talking for hours together with amazing hopes is definitely interesting. Wise sharing done really.10 (Report) Reply

    (11/29/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    Thanks for the appreciation.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 29, 2015

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