A Dragonfly Poem by Khairul Ahsan

A Dragonfly

Rating: 4.4


I was then, a boy of barely seven,
One day I was sauntering in my garden.
While I watched and touched the flowers,
Saw a dragonfly in the afternoon hours.

It had two pairs of transparent wings,
With pigments tattooed in colorful rings.
It had six long legs that remained folded,
Beneath its beautiful wings tinged with red.

The legs unfolded as it perched itself on
The flowers, the petals or the grass of the lawn.
It had a brown head with multifaceted eyes,
That could rotate at will though so small in size.

I made several attempts to catch it by its tail,
Twice I aborted but the third time I didn't fail.
Stealthily moving, just as I grasped the tail's tip,
I realized, it was my forefinger that he quickly bit.

A semblance of blood on my finger tip oozed out,
Not much pain, yet I wanted to tear its wings apart
But, studying the detailed anatomy of its body parts,
Its sheer tininess made me release it with no hurt.

Thursday, December 5, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my poet friend Professor Lento Maez, Ph D, who as I understand from his poems, likes dragonflies a lot. To me, butterflies and damselflies are better than dragonflies though.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 December 2013

@ Lasoaphia Quxazs, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. I am inspired. At that time, honestly, I didn't learn anything. But now, on hindsight, I think I can say that the lesson learned could be: 'Do not disturb nature, everybody has a right to live and to a living of its choice.' Or... 'Everybody has a reflexive mechanism of self defense.'

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@ Gary H Thank you very much for your comments on my poem. Your words are nice compliments.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@ Susy Evelyne Thanks for your comments on my poem. I am so glad that you liked it. I also felt happy to write the words 'the multifaceted eyes and the tattoo rings'.

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Dr. Ma Ali 10 October 2016

It’s a nice poem . I think you know dragonfly sometimes wants to be Spider man. I wish you could see this. It suit stretched very far and then add a tail and wings to the spree. It can also put the local spiders busy, spinning a great web in a very big tree. Unfortunately when it sit on it, it weighed a tad too much! Golly Ge! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 02 November 2016

Thank you Dr. Ali, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here. Almost same or similar comment has appeared four times, due to some system malfunctioning. I am deleting the first three.

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

A beautiful poem, my friend. I love all aspects of nature and frequently study it in detail, marveling at the intricacies and sheer beauty. The releasing of the dragonfly without any harm was the perfect end to this childhood tale. May butterflies adorn your next commune with nature

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2018

'May butterflies adorn your next commune with nature' - so wonderfully said and wished, dear friend Kelly! I think most poets have a fascination for nature and birds. I am glad to know you liked my poem. Thanks for the appreciation!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2014

@Electric Lady Thank you so much for reading my old poem and leaving a kind appreciation. I am truly inspired.

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Carol Fleming Klein 24 January 2014

I enjoy your efforts to capture in imagery and detail, the mystery of a dragonfly. They have intrigued me since the day some 5 or more years ago, when I was on a field trip with my 4th grade students to a Native American Day at a local university, and an elderly Native American man played a flutelike instrument- -a song to speak to or call the dragonfly. The next day I was at a seminar where a large dragonfly entered the room and kept circling....Do they indeed bite?

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2013

@Sj Holland, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here.

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