Patti Masterman

A Dream - Poem by Patti Masterman

Once I dreamed I awoke on a ship
In my own special room, as she swayed and dipped
I walk down the corridors, just like a queen
Touching and seeing the things in my dream
I stopped at the railing and looked at the sea
And it just as fine and as clear as could be
But storm clouds arose and the ship began to toss
I ran back to my room, completely at loss
How to find a life jacket somewhere on that boat
Something in case, just to keep me afloat
I hunted for hours; it seemed quite a search
But when I woke up, I was wearing a purse.

Comments about A Dream by Patti Masterman

  • Heather Wilkins (7/3/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    dreams can be alarming. nice write (Report) Reply

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  • Martin O'Neill (3/16/2012 5:14:00 AM)

    Good job it wasn't the one about eating a marshmallow and not being able find the pillow!

    This actually has a lovely ethereal feel to it. You have captured an essence of the dreamstate.
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  • (10/12/2011 11:34:00 PM)

    Time to get off the ship, and pursue a boat of your own? Dreams seem to have a language all their own, if only we could learn it. Very good poem, and dream. (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    Glad you did not fall over board or get sea sick.....
    Nice dream and love the ending....... Jim Troy
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  • (5/9/2010 7:50:00 AM)

    A seafaring dream indeed funny what we dream at times..I dream P/H will work at my first click not so only a dream....nice one..regards (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2010 11:35:00 AM)

    wow. nice words. i like it =) (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2010 11:28:00 AM)

    at least you hadn't wet the bed! Love the ending! -chuck (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 2, 2010

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