You came to me in the middle of the night,
oh, what a beautiful sight.
Your hair was gold, and your eyes were blue,
a nightdress I could see right through.
you came into my bed, and we embraced,
your lips had a wonderful taste.
desire was strong, and love was made,
then i awoke, and watched you fade.
Tango.
Ah.....sometimes the dreamworld can produce such excitement. How sad to awake to nothing but rumpled sheets and reality. This is not overly suggestive, yet you have managed to produce a lovely scenerio with just a few perfect words. Well done! Linda : -)
beautiful, such romance, I love this poetry, its vivid imagery, with a hint of sensuality, just the right touch of mystery...... as soon as daylight came so was she....
a good poem and the end is great, i like it best of all (there's some humour here)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the intimacy of a highly seductive moment. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.