a failure.
the harsh note of reality
had crept into his voice -
a failure
he is screaming
his pride away
and has at last become human;
on his knees
scratching the stony soil.
short, , , straight.... very simple.... but not bad
and has at last become human; on his knees scratching the stony soil...................................very precise words but very preemptive impact..........Three cheers to this Dutch Irishman if am not wrong CELTIC Tiger's prickly prowl.10 fro me Sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great impact with just a short poem. Excellent writing.