A Falling Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A Falling

Rating: 5.0


Life has been monotonous
Since the time I see the world
Melancholy lingers in my mind
Where in solitude I meditate
As my heart starts falling...

Life has been tremendous
Since the time I start to react
Intuition filling my innate senses
Awakes my valued sentiments
As my heart starts falling...

And the moment you came
Life has become harmonious
I now appreciate being alive
With your care I feel arduous
I am falling in love with you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 30 August 2007

Lovely poem Marvin, the falling was worthwhile afterall, Excellent poem. --Melvina--

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Shaye Michaelson 17 August 2007

From momotonous to tremendous to harmonius... lovely progression and well penned. I'll bet that you enjoyed the 'Falling'! Shaye

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Original Unknown Girl 16 August 2007

Quite the dreamy read this is, starts off feeling rather low and then picks up with the highs of of the heart re-energising.... good write Marvin. HG: -) xx

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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