A Field In Romania Poem by Daniel Brick

A Field In Romania

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Coming from the silver lining of the horizon
arrive my celebrative birds
creating on the sky. fluttering
an ocean of waving wings.
The whole world of soul alive
trembles in frenetic activity.
FIRST LOVES, Nicolae Labis
translated by Magdalena Biela

In Spring, in a field stretching across Romania,
a man and a woman stand side by side,
their hands lightly clasped, on their faces
the suggestion of a smile. The man is attentive
to her needs, she is fascinated with his stories.
Their stance displays the goodness of the right
people. They are waiting for the arrival of
a special Word the wind will carry down the Windway.
The land itself awaits this Word. Those of us at home,
or at work, or on a journey, or in the cemetery or a church
await the Word. Most especially, the crowd,
silent and calm, almost motionless, the Witnesses wait,
assembled on a grassy expanse below the knoll
on which the man and the woman search each other's faces
for reassurance. People shape this Word silently
with their lips, then bow their heads, knowing it is
only a few deep breaths away...

The Word itself is part of the wind which carries it
on the Windway, the part that it leaves behind,
its mysterious trace no one has seen but everyone
feels. Soon they will be carriers of the Word...
This is now the quietest place on earth... And,
with no drama of any kind, the Word spreads without speech
through the crowd, and continues on its country-wide trek.
This event is no more special than watching a cloud
form, disperse, and reform, but by then we are looking
elsewhere. It is no more special than lovers making
promises to each other, sealing each one with a kiss.
Or a man and a woman teaching their youngest daughter
the oldest dance, steadying her legs, counting out
the rhythms with her, until her child's grace takes over,
and the three of them trace the ancient pattern of footsteps
in the afternoon light. I tell you again, it is no more
special than watching grains grow, or a river flow,
or the sky darken with rain. What must happen
will happen, and we live our lives in the Meanwhile
between such momentous events-

The birds, there! The birds have arrived! They circle
about us, then swoop down and gently graze
the woman's unprotected hair. They hover over
the man's head, or settle briefly on his shoulders.
We all turn our heads upward when they suddenly
climb back into the sky. Our unison gesture is a kind
of prayer. They careen in a wide circle around us,
they glide inside the circle their flight has traced,
then shoot upward again, straight into a cone
of light they fill with caws, and calls, and shrieks.

It is no different from yesterday's sight, it's just
much bigger. Tomorrow, fewer birds will do
the same aerial dances, and not everyone will
watch. But that does not concern the rest of us.
We love the repetition of beauty... Some people
have begun to leave the field, when in an eerie
silence, riding and twirling around sun-shafts,
the birds come racing down, into our human crowd
once again, swooping upward at the last second.
Some burst through the tree canopy so headlong is
their speed! We are amazed. Cheers and clapping
resound throughout the field. Then we join hands,
and a general dance begins. Awkward at first,
with unsteady steps and botched rhythms,
gradually the better dancers assert control,
and pull the rest of us along. We hug our neighbors
tighter, lovers leading the way, and amid cascades
of laughter and row upon row of kicking feet,
swaying bodies, and smiling faces, we become what
we are meant to be - one body becoming one soul.
And long into the night the dance prevails,
in a field in Romania. Overhead, the birds circle
us again and again, calling in voices that
sound almost human....

Tuesday, June 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I set this poem in Romania because it was inspired by a Romanian poet's love poem. In his poem birds and deer are summoned by the poet to witness his newly found love. My poem is a kind of RITE OF SPRING, but unlike the Stravinsky ballet it does not climax in violence. The assembled people are quietly happy, reserved rather than hysterical, as they await two mystical events. The arrival through a kind of telepathy of a sacred, redemptive word
that is a gift to everyone, and then the arrival of the birds who provide an aerial dance that reveals a mystical understanding between humans and birds.
The narrator tends to downplay the sheer wonder of this event; he wants to integrate it with ordinary reality, blend the two realities. OK, he can try.
I myself am rapt with the wonder of it. By the way, this field in Romania can be found everywhere people cherish the Word and commune with birds.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 12 March 2016

The title led us to Romania with you. Birds in the poem were mentioned for several times, we, as if had heard their twittering in a foreign spring. What a lovely song!

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Daniel Brick 12 March 2016

Thanks much, Cigeng! This is one of my favorite poems; it's a Visionary Poem that binds humans and animals together as Creatures of the Earth. I'm glad you read and appreciated it! !

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