A Field Of Flowers Poem by Barry Middleton

A Field Of Flowers



a field of flowers speaks to me
a muted memory from the past
when summer was a child's bright toy
that seemed to fade and flee too fast

for all year long I counted time
with hash marks striking off the days
as I awaited patient June
to set the meadowlands ablaze

with school time obligations done
and spring and dogwood past their prime
I made my way into the hills
where nature yet composed its rhyme

it rested just below the path
that years before had been a road
a clearing faithful as the sun
displayed once more its motherload

the garden knew no gardener's care
beyond the majesty of grace
the seasons were its destiny
and no one knew its hiding place

but now those hills are gentrified
another man has claimed my spot
and built a home to call his own
and tamed my precious meadow lot

A Field Of Flowers
Monday, June 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,home,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

A map of icons we lived and loved.

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Michael Walker 26 June 2017

The dazzling colours of the flowers, the sky and the sun are most impressive. I think you have chosen a form which expresses the ideas seamlessly. Rhymed couplets, lower case letters, without traditional punctuation. Formidable.

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Barry Middleton 27 June 2017

Thanks Michael. I prefer not to use punctuation as it makes the appearance of the poem more pleasing to me.But sometimes punctuation is a must due to sentence structure.

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