A Flower Poem by Aditya Pratap Nayak

A Flower

Rating: 5.0


A flower...
A flower has withered...!
Who did this?
Why it is shriveled?

Many possibilities...
Bee, Sun, Air, Water...
Lets ask the gardener.

Bee...! !
A loving to flower
may be raped her time to time
and let her down in shame.

Sun...! !
The energy booster.
May be gave her more light
which faded her slight.

Air...! !
A faithful messenger
may be gave her wrong information
'Bee has kept a wrong intention'
tried to betray her innocence
and might have done some offense.

Water...! !
A life donator.
may be stopped due to jealousy
As it has fainted before flower's fantasy.

I walked...
To the gardener.
asked, 'who is the culprit?
why has it shrunk? '
'No one, for a ceremony I plucked it...',
he replied.

Gardener did this! !
Gardener did this! ! !
A care taker...
In every single moment
many flowers are loosing their innocence
by their near and dear.

So, Please...
I am begging of you all gardener
let them live freely
allow them to take freedom breath
let them blossom properly
show them the right path
and see the fragrance of earth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 January 2016

Verily, our own are our great enemies

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Poetic Lets the young girls grow they are ripe yet... well written Aditya 10s

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Wow this is an excellent poem about lost innocence. Let us work together to keep those so called gardners out. Well written, I really like it.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

Amazing and beautiful.10 for it.

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Marvin Brato 03 September 2008

Explicitly nice poem, the flower is where the beauty of nature is centered... and where every living thing is awed by its innocence! Let her splendor be used up by all, it is where its significance lies! a 10.

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