Wednesday, September 3, 2008

A Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

A flower...
A flower has withered...!
Who did this?
Why it is shriveled?
...
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Aditya Pratap Nayak
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 January 2016

Verily, our own are our great enemies

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Poetic Lets the young girls grow they are ripe yet... well written Aditya 10s

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Wow this is an excellent poem about lost innocence. Let us work together to keep those so called gardners out. Well written, I really like it.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

Amazing and beautiful.10 for it.

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Marvin Brato 03 September 2008

Explicitly nice poem, the flower is where the beauty of nature is centered... and where every living thing is awed by its innocence! Let her splendor be used up by all, it is where its significance lies! a 10.

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Aditya Pratap Nayak

Aditya Pratap Nayak

Danambatha, India
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