A Forts And Hills Moon Poem by Luo Zhihai

A Forts And Hills Moon



Phoenixes fly down on the Chinese parasol branches, several poems
Orioles sound in the smoky willows, one screen of painting
At the horizon, hanging a Forts and Hills Moon
In the heart, filling the comrade-in-arms feelings


9/10/2017
对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai


◆ Chinese Text

关山月


凤落梧枝诗几首
鹂鸣烟柳画一屏
天边悬挂关山月
心里充盈战友情

Saturday, September 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: arm,bird,feeling,heart,hill,horizon,moon,one,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 10 September 2017

The phoenixes are landing on the parasol trees. Those auspicious birds are choosy about where they land, so I think maybe it indicates that your poems are full of inspiration these days. I like the phrase FORTS AND HILLS MOON. It instantly creates a picture. Since you can describe the moon that way, I think there are many other picturesque ways you could describe the moon, but FORTS AND HILLS MOON is especially evocative. I remember seeing it in a Tang poem.

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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