Luo Zhihai

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After Rain - Poem by Luo Zhihai

★ After Rain

☆ Poetry by Zeng Jifan [China]
☆ Translation by Luo Zhihai [China]


Went for an outing being sunny day after rain
White hat on the mountain was uncapped at last
Orioles and butterflies dancing in the thick growth of grass
Asked me where I would pour out my heart


北京时间2015年1月23日22:30至22:50翻译
B eijing time on January 23,2015,22: 30 to 22: 50 Translation


◆ Chinese Text

★ 雨后

☆ 曾纪番 诗


雨后晴天野外行
山头白帽未消清
黄鹂粉蝶丛中舞
问我余 情向哪倾


原载《海丰文学》2004年4月总12期

Topic(s) of this poem: rain


Comments about After Rain by Luo Zhihai

  • (11/7/2017 10:44:00 AM)

    a poem of release from pent up pressure? it is good to walk and talk! ......... well penned Luo (Report)Reply

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  • (10/12/2017 9:49:00 PM)

    Another version:

    After the rains on a sunny day
    I went out for a walk,
    The snow had finally
    melted at mountain tops,
    Orioles and butterflies
    danced in the thickets,
    they asked me: where was
    I going to pour out my heart
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    (10/12/2017 9:56:00 PM)

    posted here: https: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/after-rain-another-version-of-luo-zhuhai-translation-of-a-chinese-poem-by-zeng-jifan/

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  • Luo Zhihai (1/27/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    Hope you have a good day! Also wish you write more poems! (Report)Reply

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  • Rajesh Thankappan (1/25/2015 9:15:00 AM)

    With the snow melting on the mountain top and the weather clearing, the nature presents a picture of richness and vigour. Beautiful imagery. Loved the poem and your translation. (Report)Reply

    Luo Zhihai(1/27/2015 4:23:00 AM)

    Hope you have a good day! Also wish you write more poems!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 23, 2015



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