Tuesday, June 29, 2010

A Freudian Slip (Who Nose?)

I want to clear this matter up some way
And at the same time make my point

That love note I sent you the other day?
The one that got your nose all out of joint?

I think I simply typed too fast
And didn’t say what I meant to say

Not …“I like your huge, turnip nose”…
But “I like your cute turned up nose”

Was What I really meant to say
David Whalen
Paul Brookes 30 April 2018
Great poem made me smile oh you were in hot water indeed great write
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Bri Edwards 22 April 2018
this is about to go into my/our May 2018 showcase. thanks. bri ;)
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Bri Edwards 03 April 2018
oh, i commented a mere five years ago the last time. bri :)
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Bri Edwards 03 April 2018
a series of laughs were caused by your ending. good show! ! to MyPoemList. and a showcase perhaps? ? bri ;)
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Bri Edwards 26 December 2012
nobody ever believes me when i say the wrong thing and try to set them straight. i hope you had better luck. the poem, though not huge, IS cute. thanks. bri guess i'll have to put it on my mypoemslist.
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Shirley Hanley 27 July 2010
Your first poem made me smile... this one had me laughing my 'arse' off. Shirley: -)
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