A Full Circle Poem by ritty patnaik

A Full Circle

Rating: 5.0


a flower wilts,
it does not die,
the fragranceis lost,
petals dont cry.

away from lover,
love does not perish,
a lost note in music,
one can still relish.


days pass away,
the words said dont vanish,
sorrow spreads in the world,
happiness, piece wise
distributed!

what is new today,
becomes old tomorrow
what is body today,
will be the ash of sorrow !
a full circle, of life cycle! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 04 August 2009

The poem brings out the philosophy of life and existence very well! 10! -Raj Nandy

0 0 Reply
Ejaz Khan 30 July 2009

How very true, full of wisdom!

0 0 Reply
Rakesh Bedi 29 July 2009

The concluding stanza is great, ritty!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success