A Golden Dream Poem by ritty patnaik

A Golden Dream

Rating: 5.0


a soft silken voice,
irresistable,
i hear at night.
venturing out, to see
in a lonely hill of dream
a waterfall begins,
and flows into a stream..
i heard dewdrops falling,
on leaves,
that lonely night,
or was it the murmuring,
of sweet soft breeze,
in my mind?
a gentle tune of music
began, in the prism
of my mind,
with strange harmonic
tune of love.
i guess, the call of love,
was to ensnare me
into the ink -blue fold
of night dream.

the golden net of dream,
with strange sensation,
of sensuality,
from the breath
of your being,
even if far away from me.

is it possible to have
such unearthly feeling,
of joy and elation,
just by the hint
of your presence?
you looked at me,
and looked away,
elsewhere.

yet in your smile,
i could sense, a
spread of honeyed joy,
which put me back to sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 26 December 2009

like that to dream a dream is a dream itself with lovely words to caress your sleep is worth a+++10 regards

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Ejaz Khan 23 October 2009

An amazing write, soft, beautiful and penetrating into soul, love it!

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How beautiful is this golden dream as it begins with a waterfall to flow with all your glorious words gently, floating, softly, breathlessly down the page. How beautifully I will sleep tonight as it has lulled me into another realm. 10 love Karin

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Raj Nandy 15 October 2009

THE BEAUTY OF THE IMAGERY REALLY MAKES THE DREAM GOLDEN! 10 + -Raj

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Bob Blackwell 15 October 2009

Your beautiful words make love images in my mind. Dreams all wrapped in waterfalls and streams. 'I hear the dewdrops falling on leaves, or was it the murmering of a sweet soft breeze'. Wow! ! You must have lovely dreams. Warm regards Bob

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