A Girl Poem by rajnish jena

A Girl

Rating: 5.0


its a last poem for you
i was wishing i would never write
but i am writing and you know what it means...

a girl
just a girl
but became the goddess for me
slowly when she came closer
became a friend
won my heart
bought everything i have my own...



i have feeling for the girl
i want to leave her as i am not her anymore
as i am just a tree without leaves for her
a sky who has no color
a bird without wings
a old man without hand and legs

she wants to leave me and staying becoz he has not said yes to her
she has not decded becoz she still thinking she can get him
she has no feelings for me but i am waiting
why? ? ? i don't know
but now quiting
taking back a broken heart which was cured by this girl
she became the goddess and i am stil he worst one
i hurt her
bu how much i got hurt
nobody cares
let me hurt
i deserve this
i betrayed her
so i have to leave
i have to leve everything
have fun my goddesss
have fun my kay
its the last time i am saying you mine
as you are not mine anymore.......

i thought we will fly in the sky
we will touch the blue sky
play in the clouds
but i have nevr thought we will fall with the clouds
tears will rain in the place of water
love will become painful
and will stab the beutiful heart we evr care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

oh raj... that is so sad.... i'm sorry for your pain, you really don't deserve this... well, from every bad experience there is indeed a lesson learned... take that lesson, and make progress in the future friend.... +10 from me... thanks for sharing

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joyous moments shared in the clear sky...gone gray, the clouds vanquish, then you're in mid air, then eventually you'll fall... there's nothing to grasp to help you back up, so you can do nothing till you hit the ground...it hurt's excrutiatingly...but you must then pull it together, molding yourself to be stronger.... nothing's planned to fail...but it happens... nice poem raj..... thanks for sharing. best wishes from me to you dear, thanks for everything.

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It is an irony to think that love ends in sadness in most of the occasions. The theme of the poem is love and it is a good and awesome poem as per my vision and knowledge.

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Eindaray Kyaw 21 August 2012

I 'm sure that this is the most suitable one for healing the breach between the star-crosses lovers! I love it!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 November 2009

A sad poem….why the girl is so…well poet wanted like that. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita. UK Please read my Why Hack My She [in elite 500] or others. niv

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Angelic(Annie) Female 09 June 2009

A beautiful heart-to-heart talk with us, your fellow poets, and that's amazingly penned :) 10ner for you!

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Brishti Mazumdar 07 June 2009

I, as if, walked thru a very familiar way....Thnx for sharing...10+...Brishti Mazumdar

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