A Dream Poem by rajnish jena

A Dream

Rating: 5.0


i saw a dream
with flowers in the garden
with the breeze in a sudden
with the birds singing
with the bees beeeng

i saw a dream
with a beautiful life
having a adorable wife
with a sweet face
in a sensitive case

i saw a dream
a friend was there
still is here
a sweet sister was there
with a caring hand over my hair

i saw a dream
with beautiful thoughts
with a lots of hope
was happy bcoz i have friends
and a sister more than friends

i saw a dream
of complete life
became so much happy
but i forgot its just a dream
will over as soon as i am waking

i saw a dream
is it my fault?
i thought everything mine
but they were in my dream
they were always far from mine


its just a dream
which is now over
i am still here
the stupid innocent flower

the dream is over
nomore bees are there
no breeze is there
no birds are there

the dream is over
i am stunned again
i am alone
noone is here
just me and my lonlyness is here

the dream is over
the relationship is also over
the caring is just now flirting
and the sweet words are now paining

the dream is over
now feeling the truth
the smiling tooth
the sweet thoughts and
the emotional crafts

the dream is over
it was not mine
bcoz i was just a guest there
played some bad innings
and left losing the heart in stead of earning

the dream is over
i am thankful to my friends and sister
now i am over
seeing the tomorrow
planning for the future
hoping not to be a creature
living here and there

dream is over

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 23 March 2009

Rajnish... don't worry your dreams will come true as long as their are regularly renewed. nice heartfelt poem

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Ishita Mehta 01 April 2009

u r poem is vry well written..........n dnt wory 1 day ur dreams definately turn into reality............i know that...........

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Sameer Ahmed 03 April 2009

A nice way of capturing readers attention by describing both aspects of a dream, the one that is inside and the one that comes afterwards when one wakes up..........Description of solitude is very elegant after what you have witnessed in your dream............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Aqila Hussain 04 April 2009

that was so cool i think that was the best one you have i love you babe lots of love aqila xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

nice 2 read and well written

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Shania K. Younce 11 August 2014

I like this poem. Fine job. Bien!

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Gajanan Mishra 30 January 2013

Dream and dreams. dream is over. I am thankful to my friends and sisters. good poem. I invite you Raj, to read my poems and comment. Rajbhai, mu tumaku nimantrana kruchhi mora kabitagidika padhi kicchhi kahiba. kemiti achha?

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Lerato M 31 January 2010

it started off beautifully then ended sadly yet i still feel as if the dream is not that far....

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started with a beautiful dreams then endedsadly but don't lose your dreams you will always find who desrve you..beautriful poem with beautiful images

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Shreya Chatterjee 13 September 2009

a beutiful dream indeed...what is most amazing is the way your make the reader walk with your dream..simply amazing...

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