A Girl I Know Poem by Brooke Luchich

A Girl I Know

Rating: 5.0


There is a girl who I know and she’s not always what she seems,
She wears a smile on her face each day although inside there’s only screams.
To her friends and her family she always makes a good impression,
But really it’s all an act she constantly puts on, just to hide her depression.
She knows there are people worse off, and that’s something she doesn’t doubt,
She doesn’t want sympathy; she just wants to stop feeling so down and out.
Understanding why she feels like this is something she can’t comprehend,
How she used to be so happy and then suddenly it all just came to an end.
Don’t try to figure her out cause she’ll never give anything away,
Even when she’s hurting most she’ll swear to you that’s she okay.
It must be hard having nothing in life that can make you laugh anymore,
And only being able to hope that your life will go back to the way it was before.
I’m sure that it must be difficult feeling so unwanted and worthless,
But you’ll never tell by looking at her because she’s such a good actress.
If you can’t stand how she’s always down and think being upset does no good,
She’ll just agree because she hates herself more than you ever could.
She stares into the mirror and only sees everything she seems to lack,
Not knowing that her own worst enemy is there looking straight back.
Life isn’t fair and that’s something everyone will find out in their own way,
She knows that it’s hard, but she also knows that tomorrow’s a new day.
She won’t give up; she knows that life can be beautiful even through her eyes,
And she finds a new reason to be strong with every tear she dries.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The bigest enemies we meet in our life are those who envy us and just live to distroy us by stealing everything we manage to dig out with our bare hands... Never feel worthless - know your strength and use it wisely, never showing off... Nice write...Thank you for sharing...

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Tori Fleck 06 September 2009

Oh mygosh... this poem totally describes me. This is VERY well written. Keep it up :) I am giving this poem a 10! :)

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Megan Ewing 16 July 2009

This very good! I know that girl too, it's me. For all the people who ever felt that way they will relate to this poem and for everyone else they will begin to understand what it feels like.

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Hailey Agnew 16 July 2009

wow i love this poem i understood every word i've been the girl, and i know how it feels. everyone will probably experience it at one point in their life

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Chitra - 15 July 2009

an eyeopener write on foes both external and internal..well written

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sky dreams 17 June 2009

no matter how bad your enemies seem to be.. sometimes the worst possible enemy you can have is yourself and you dont even know it.... great write very truthful

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