Love Of My Life... Poem by sim sharma

Love Of My Life...

Rating: 5.0


I will lov the person...
who can hear my silence more than my words
who can make me fly in d sky, like birds.


I will die for the person, who will live for me,
who wil not become my burden, but make me free...


The guy who will always turn my tears into smile,
who wil care for me, and become my life


the eyes wich always look at me,
d heart which always beat for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 October 2009

wishing you all the best

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Shelly Shelly 25 October 2009

nicely written..n well imagined..10+++

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great job :) :) i like your poem :) :)

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2009

A lot of strict specifications you list out there...better invite quotations competetive! a poem very pleasing to read...dreams and visions of a young sim(ple) heart! good piece Sim...i liked...10

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Rajinder Singh 30 October 2009

good poem i hope you find him

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Shelly Shelly 10 November 2009

hmmm b'ful poem writen from the core of heart..soft poem..romantic approach..an expectation of a gal at her age..of some beloved..excellent done.. silence communicated..here again..10 again.

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Rex Mathew Mathew 01 November 2009

'who can hear my silence more than my words' ' I will die for the person, who will live for me' Simple lines, yet they possess some deep beauty. Your works do come from the heart. A very pleasing and life - filled poem. I hope you write more and get better. And I, like numerous others, hope you find your true love.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009

Wishing the love game a grand success.

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Philip Winchester 31 October 2009

Well Sim you are for sure in the right Ball Park....Stay around and keep Writing. Kind Regards Philip

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Raj Nandy 31 October 2009

Dear SIM, May you find a person who is true and forever remains devoted to you! My best wishes are always with you! -Raj

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