A Girl With A Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0

once upon a time,
I was wandering in a beautiful garden
I saw a pretty girl sitting on the grass
she looked torn deep inside,
and tears filled her eyes
a little girl with a broken heart
nothing I can do to comfort her
I told myself why don't I talk to her?
I asked her why all this tears?
you are still young and beautiful like spring flowers
she looked at me with teary eyes, and told me:
what becomes of a girl with a broken heart?
I was touched by the look in her eyes
now sitting at the same place,
I wonder what happened to the girl with sored eyes?
I've nothing but blame myself-
for not trying to make things better
maybe she is in another garden now
and her soul leaps high with the hummingbirds,
singing a happy song
with the smell of fragrant roses all around her

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Kuji Soliman 13 September 2009

This poem is exellent, i loved it! you have a way of touching people through poetry

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

'a little girl with a broken heart nothing I can do to comfort her I told myself why don't I talk to her? I asked her why all this tears? ' Mankind should be the essence of writing.10+.

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Anong All 31 July 2008

Nice poem, sounds giving :)

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Marilyn Lott 02 May 2008

I hope the girl is in a sunny, beautiful place and has a good life. Sweet poem that will have a happy ending! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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