Friday, September 6, 2019

A Glass Of Poetry-Filled Juice Comments

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Hungry maws ooze
No juice to grasp grammar obtuse,
Nor would a parched throat choose
On poem's metaphors to muse!
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 08 September 2019

'Nor has a dry throat any use For poetry-filled glass of juice'....says it all...Your usage of words are always stand apt to the content...no exception here the word 'maw' too...a cute short poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 September 2019

Thank you Indiraji for the good words, but poetry is not just what is said, but how is it said as well.

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