It feels so right, I can't believe my luck,
I go carefully, with a full cup,
you're my heroine, you make me stronger,
just when I feel, I can't go on any longer,
sometimes a breeze, and sometimes perilous,
our story continues, and it began thus.
And when in life, I would lose my way,
it was you honey, who would hold me sway,
when I've lost faith, in all of mankind,
it's you i look for, and it's you i find,
our love consumes, but at a slow burn,
a faster love ain't my concern.
A golden thread that never rusts,
drawn in elegance and wound in trust,
a golden thread our lives entwined,
it holds us together but it doesn't bind,
a thread so fine and delicately spun,
where two broken strands can become one.
You make me laugh and you make me blue,
still I want to see the autumn colours with you,
don't want to leave you with the wrong impression,
or for my feelings to go without expression,
we've had more highs than we've had lows,
just want to say what your heart already knows,
A golden thread that never rusts,
drawn in elegance and wound in trust,
a golden thread our lives entwined,
it holds us together but it doesn't bind,
a thread so fine and delicately spun,
where two broken strands can become one.
you're my heroine, you make me stronger it was you honey, who would hold me sway when i've lost faith, a golden thread our lives entwined it holds us together. Love is a mystery, you are presenting the melifluent notes of this mystery in this poem. Liked it very much dear poet. Thank you. tony
Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Just one question: On line three, did you really mean HEROIN or did you mean HEROINE?
thanks Kim Barney for the compliment and good call it's Heroine and I shall now correct it!
A golden thread still intact even when time, distance and pieces of paper say otherwise
It was certainly sincere at the time of writing, The jury's verdict on the prosecution - there are two guilty parties when a couple break down, many thanks
Rule of law: inherent duty on the Prosecution to prove the prisoner's guilt beyond a reasonable doubt. The poet actually proving his sincerity and trust in such committed and pure love in such smooth but intense poem. Well written and beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow really beautiful that golden thread that never rusts its your trust that has held you both together till now hope you always will succeed in all your endeavours good write............ -10 anjali