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A Golden Thread

Rating: 4.3
It feels so right, i can't believe my luck
I go carefully, with a full cup
you're my heroine, you make me stronger
just when i feel, i can't go on any longer
sometimes a breeze, and sometimes perilous
our story continues, and it began thus.

And when in life, i would lose my way
it was you honey, who would hold me sway
when i've lost faith, in all of mankind
it's you i look for, and it's you i find
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Saturday, November 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity,gratitude,heart,love and life,marriage
love eternal a love that lasts despite life's ups and downs.
Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2017
you're my heroine, you make me stronger it was you honey, who would hold me sway when i've lost faith, a golden thread our lives entwined it holds us together. Love is a mystery, you are presenting the melifluent notes of this mystery in this poem. Liked it very much dear poet. Thank you. tony
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Peter Strugnell 27 July 2017
Thank you very much tony, indeed love is a mystery.
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Kim Barney 05 April 2015
Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Just one question: On line three, did you really mean HEROIN or did you mean HEROINE?
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Peter Strugnell 16 April 2015
thanks Kim Barney for the compliment and good call it's Heroine and I shall now correct it!
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Jian arkcl 17 October 2011
A golden thread still intact even when time, distance and pieces of paper say otherwise
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Peter Strugnell 08 February 2011
It was certainly sincere at the time of writing, The jury's verdict on the prosecution - there are two guilty parties when a couple break down, many thanks
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Malaya Roses 07 February 2011
Rule of law: inherent duty on the Prosecution to prove the prisoner's guilt beyond a reasonable doubt. The poet actually proving his sincerity and trust in such committed and pure love in such smooth but intense poem. Well written and beautiful.
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Anjali Sinha 28 November 2009
wow really beautiful that golden thread that never rusts its your trust that has held you both together till now hope you always will succeed in all your endeavours good write............ -10 anjali
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