A Good Choice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Good Choice

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I I wished her to remain with me for long
I miscalculated and proved wrong
She was not the right choice
I am suffocated with choked voice

The leaves cling to branches
Though they are closer by inches
They have created the position and place
As of now they present strong face

All natural objects are ruled by law
We do not find any lacuna or flaw
They loose the identity with loss of ground
When tree finds hostile environment around

We have inherited treachery and deception
That is oour blood from the inception
It differs in the mattter of adoption
Though we have many ways and options

She was free bird and preferred freedom
The females go for it but seldom
If there is no trust and equall opportuity
There may not be any use for its oontinuity

The idea itself was ill conceived
She had different ideas and not well received
She may boost sometimes of her beauty
I may feel so bad and take it as pity

The dream remained for brief
The illusion too came fast with some relief
I wished her bright future and parted
I was happy with life and quietly started

There is definite message for lovely couples
They got to believe in life to be very simple
It does not take you anywhere in isolation
You got to maintain good and healthy relation

I can certainly forgo certain things
If I find no relevance in something
It has to endure for good times to come
The presence of partner is always welcome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshna Chopra 19 September 2010

The leaves cling to branches Though they are closer by inches They have created the position and place

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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