A Granite Stone Poem by Dennis Go

A Granite Stone

Rating: 5.0


I carved my heart out
On a granite stone
And etched your initials
Though how hard it is
To feel
The chisel's sharpness.

I can no longer
Maintain its composure.

The sculpture cannot
Contain you.

You have been
Quite demanding.

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wow... nice write and nice use of the figurative! nice wordings! 10!

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Dennis Go

Dennis Go

Manila, Philippines
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