Dennis Go

Rookie - 20 Points (Dec.10,1976 / Manila, Philippines)

A Granite Stone - Poem by Dennis Go

I carved my heart out
On a granite stone
And etched your initials
Though how hard it is
To feel
The chisel's sharpness.

I can no longer
Maintain its composure.

The sculpture cannot
Contain you.

You have been
Quite demanding.

Comments about A Granite Stone by Dennis Go

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/21/2010 1:47:00 AM)

    wow... nice write and nice use of the figurative! nice wordings! 10! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 30, 2010

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